What a beautiful poem Thomas ! I also liked your poster ... would I be able to give you some constructive feedback on your survival poster ? a) I would have liked to see the events in chronological order b) Brazil is a 'proper noun', ie, the name of a place, so needs a C/L Keep up your amazing mahi !!
Well done, Thomas! Love the background colours! Keep working hard!
ReplyDeleteWhat a beautiful poem Thomas ! I also liked your poster ... would I be able to give you some constructive feedback on your survival poster ?
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b) Brazil is a 'proper noun', ie, the name of a place, so needs a C/L
Keep up your amazing mahi !!
Nice colourful work and a lovely poem keep up the good work Thomas.
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